So once again, I decided to not deviate that much from my second or third elevator pitches because a lot of the feedback I have received from all of you has been positive and all constructive criticism I adjusted to in the earlier pitches. I think for this pitch my main focus was to seem more relaxed and approachable; I know it may not sound so professional, but I didn't want my tone to come off so stiff like it had in previous videos. Also, I think it's super hard to fit all that I want to say about my business in 60 seconds haha. Hope you all enjoy and let me know what you think!!
** sorry for the awkward thumbnail of my face xD **
It seems like you've come a long way in your venture concept. I really like the way you have taken the advice you have been given and put it into action. You've really made
ReplyDeleteRoom for improvement in your plans. Here's a link to my post http://katieaustintx.blogspot.com/2016/04/venture-concept-no-2.html?m=1